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Airlock Bubbles
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
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Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:41:29 PM in AEST
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I would be honored to be your first
Your impressionable bubble
Fizzy at the seam, waiting to burst
All of which is obscene
And all too well rehearsed
All too familiar
Is the sinner and his dead
The flower used for its nectar
Then left to plant its own seed
It is the intention of this nature
That we all somehow get what we need
Deservingly
It is felt instantaneously
Instant in its aftershocks
And consistent with its dominance
An airlock
A bubble with out its tolerance
Is porous
Permeable to the sliding rock
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Re: Airlock Bubbles
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 07:32:55 PM AEST
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great write, i especially like the rhyming pattern.
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Re: Airlock Bubbles
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:59:08 AM AEST
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Kinda gave me the feeling of my very first sip of booze
and what I think of it now...lol
It is VERY though provoking to say the least-
...very well wrriten as always jyss...
I took a bit from it.
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