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A Marriage Proposal

Contributed by ramfire on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:35:57 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Near the river Jane,
theres a little shack plain.
Not much my dear to see.
Come and share it with me.

Bring your little dog, Poke,
whos the color of smoke.
And a cushion for sleep
that at night warming keep.

The roof doesnt have leak,
new floors pine lacking squeak..
Bed of oak with springs neat,
quilt down comforters heat

Job is steady at trade,
where broad sheets are fast made.
Theres employment for you,
live with me plans come true.

Copyright © ramfire ... [ 2005-10-13 10:35:57]
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Re: A Marriage Proposal (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:50:08 AM AEST
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I dearly love this write. It has such a nostalgic feel to it. I can see my Grandfather proposing to my Grandmother in this fashion. He was a mere blacksmith when they married and they built back up a large ranch working together with a dream in mind. Reach the apex they certainly did, hand in hand and heart to heart.

Rita

Re: A Marriage Proposal (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:51:57 AM AEST
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This is very good. I like the simplicity of it because it seems more sincere.

Re: A Marriage Proposal (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 11:09:14 AM AEST
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This was a really good write. Simplicity at it's best.

Jane~
(Who loves a river named after her *smiles*)

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