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Shooting Star Swarm
Contributed by
RAGEyourDREAM
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Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:36:41 PM in AEST
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You so skillfully tell of nights that can't be captured in words
Telling me that the entwined, tepid ivys
Are all an illusion
Give me a soul, even if it's made by your own hands
As long as I've a place to cry, I needn't see the stars
Your calling voice always turns into sadness
Just proving to me that I am this ugly
But I still need it
If you can't touch me, it's the same as if I didn't exist
Days that pass only in ambiguity endlessly push me to loneliness
Binding me until I've nothing more to wish for
When they fade
Intoning my love, even a subtle vibration
Causes it to reverberate to the overflowing
Miracles and the like abandon this flesh in a split-second
Just teaching me that I am this powerless
But I still need them
If I can't touch you, it's the same as if I didn't exist
Though it's just obstructing countless meanings
I don't even know if I'm beautiful or not here, even now
Your calling voice always turns into sadness
Just proving to me that I am this ugly
But I still need it
If you can't touch me, it's the same as if I didn't exist
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RAGEyourDREAM
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Re: Shooting Star Swarm
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by crazy on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 08:07:59 PM AEST
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| wow it really capures your theme really well very expressive good write |
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Re: Shooting Star Swarm
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 08:23:02 PM AEST
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I really liked this...the night has always been more my time than the day, and the dream always a sweeter reality, perhaps that's why my writing also often involves dreams ..Thank you for sharing it...
Brandin |
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