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the ghost of my past
Contributed by
crazy
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Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:48:31 PM in AEST
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the ghost of my past
haunts me night and day
my time is fading fast
she wont go away
i see her when i dream
always awakink with a scream
if you could only see
the pain she inflicks upon me
shes always going to be there
waiting with a stare
she never leaves my side
theres nowhere to hide
i ask why but shes waiting for me to die
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Re: the ghost of my past
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 08:28:50 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading the poem!
Its very nicely written..
pass my message to your friend!
cheers,
~glass |
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Re: the ghost of my past
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 02:52:08 AM AEST
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| sad so sad |
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Re: the ghost of my past
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by maestar on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 10:46:44 AM AEST
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VERY GOOD, SHORT BUT STRANGELY UNIQE. I LIKE IT VERY MUCH.
TELL YOUR FRIEND SHE SHOULD JOIN THE SITE, IT SOUNDS LIKE SHE SHOULD SHARE HER TALENT WITH US. |
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Re: the ghost of my past
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by sararose1950 on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:02:59 PM AEST
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| I liked this-tell her to keep writing!! |
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Re: the ghost of my past
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by SylviaWalters on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:05:41 AM AEST
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| brilliant- like anohter person said, try and get her to join the site too... :) |
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