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Mad Mother Nature
Contributed by
Spike
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Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:46:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Nature is crazy
Brooks babble in their twisted beds,
Waves bash their brains out on sandy shores
While waterfalls commit hara-kiri
And everything seems to be eating something else.
Nature is nuts
She hoards water at the poles
While half of the earth is a dustbowl
Everything is poison if you have enough of it
And shes always blowing hot and cold..
Nature is wild
Storms and tempests rake the land,
The seas boil and swallow ships whole
The ground cracks under you and volcanos spit at the sky
And try telling anyone she is your Mother
Copyright ©
Spike
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2005-10-13 22:46:23]
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Re: Mad Mother Nature
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by brew on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:49:40 PM AEST
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Have to agree, on this,.....Been off and on here, yet that is Texas..so differ.......Cold....cool and then Hott, again.....but we look as that as Texas.! But nice, write, and true.........Thanks for the input, on weather, and nature.!
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Re: Mad Mother Nature
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 11:47:29 PM AEST
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Hey.........I know some guys like that ! !.....lol
sorry....k, on a serious note, this was exquistiely written,
spike. Gosh, but I do love how you write. So full of
colour and emotion !!
"and everything seems to be eating something else..."
isn't that just natures way, eh?
Excellently descriptive, spike. Loved this.
~Breezy |
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Re: Mad Mother Nature
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:15:42 AM AEST
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Very good write and very thought provoking.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Mad Mother Nature
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by jigsma on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 06:28:42 PM AEST
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| Just like a woman, eh?! :) Very well written.. Love the "emphasis" lines! |
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Re: Mad Mother Nature
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:18:19 AM AEST
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This is a great poem!
Don't ask me why cuz I won't be able to tell you, but trust me when I say this is a great poem.
I guess is probably the fact that I read the
whole poem and actually wanted to read it,
which is always a good sign!
Keep on writing!
Ash* |
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Re: Mad Mother Nature
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by candysears on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 02:42:39 PM AEST
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Right time or not this is a beautiful write.
Everyone need to wake up...Mother nature is lashing out..
This deserved a high 5
God Bless! |
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Re: Mad Mother Nature
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 07:19:51 AM AEST
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If you ask my daughter she'd prob say all mothers were mad lol,
great write, different take, your work flows so beautifully, thanx for sharing it with us :-) |
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Re: Mad Mother Nature
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 12:43:19 PM AEST
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| Be nice YPDC put six stars up there so us fans and admirers o' Spike be less redundant with that 5 and more correct in how good your stuff is, This ones right up there describing that ol' brutality of Nature with less judgment than I ever seen. |
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Re: Mad Mother Nature
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by Lionel on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 10:48:13 PM AEST
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You make us think in ways we may not unless we read you. You are quite unique.
Something happened in the garden to make "Mother" nature the shrew that she is. It wasn't that way before the fall.
God bless
Lionel |
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