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Ode to a penny from heaven
Contributed by
reprobate
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 12:40:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Oh, sweet heavens, open your kind heart to me
play your delicate lyrics upon my breast and brow
let the child who once wished you away really see
let him sing and dance in this early awakening now
grant to him all the joy that is spread far and wide
when the clouded skies open and feed all alive
for and to him, make the same fair music inside
nourish his dreams with which makes all life thrive
bathe his soul in the pleasant that is only yours.
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2005-10-14 00:40:13]
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Re: Ode to a penny from heaven
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by Keila on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 01:00:49 AM AEST
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Re: Ode to a penny from heaven
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:10:17 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
Send me some of that early morning rain.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Ode to a penny from heaven
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by brew on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 09:22:19 AM AEST
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WEll, this is lovely. The rain, that falls on the brest and brow.....can picture, standing out, on a dark road..looking, up and only feeling the rain fall.! Very vivid, images....Rain can have all effects, and so differently.!
Beautiful
Brew~ |
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Re: Ode to a penny from heaven
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 07:32:58 AM AEST
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I love the rain. I like standing in the rain just letting it saturate me. It feels so good. I remember running and playing out in the rain as a child, so I always let my children be apart of Mother Nature's cleansing.
Beautiful write.
Thank you for sharing.
Much peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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