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Enough
Contributed by
Loende
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:50:23 AM in AEST
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Enough
How many times does a human being fall in love?
And I dont mean fall in lust, or into an obsession or infatuation,
Scratching a vague itch.
I mean marrow deep, soul-sucking, lose your sense of up and down love.
The kind that leaves you shuddering and giddy.
Because once cant be enough.
Can it?
Is that all that I get?
One stupid roll of the dice
Eight
Six
SNAKE EYES!
When I didnt even know how to pay attention to the roll?
I was just learning the steps,
Because of course, theres no manual,
No numbered directions on how to do this or that,
Or what to expect.
No do-over, delete, cut, erase.
No help desk for when you **** it up.
What kind of a raw deal is that?
I need a place to tuck my feet in at night,
Someone who knows how I take my tea,
Why I hold my breath.
I need to be able to come home and exhale and know ,
That someone thinks that I matter.
Someone who wants me for me,
Embraceable, fallible me.
Not because Im convenient and nice.
I read the terms and conditions
And this wasnt in the small print.
I want to steep my soul in someone elses
I want to have my insides poured out
Hot and aching and alive.
Because I never knew it would be that short.
I should have stored it up, canned it,
Laid in reserves for this bitter lonely winter.
Once cant be it.
Because Im afraid that if I cant let go,
If I cant jump off that cliff and have someone there to catch me,
Someone who will just know when I leap,
That Ill cease to be.
Ill live in black and white.
No more stereo, no sweet music
33 inch vinyl, obsolete, with no needle to play me.
You cant expect me not to crave that, you cant.
Because now that I know how it tastes,
How it sits with you, lingers, sweet and filling and oh-so-sustaining.
You cant really think that I can walk this alone,
I need a co-pilot, a navigator, a keeper.
I was Wonder Woman.
I could fly.
So once just cant be enough.
Copyright ©
Loende
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2005-10-14 07:50:23]
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Re: Enough
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:57:51 AM AEST
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I hear ya. Good write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Enough
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 09:29:27 AM AEST
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Once shouldn't be enough, if it let go. Life is too short to live without love, or cherry pie.
Take care.
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Re: Enough
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 06:17:21 AM AEST
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It grips one by the throat, it truly does. I don't see how anyone could not be moved by this.
beannaicht Dé ort
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Re: Enough
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 06:14:44 PM AEST
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Wow.. I held my breath through the whole of that.
Now, THAT is what Love is all about. You have some awesome lines in this, I agree with what BlueGusto said about that one line, but I also love this:
I want to steep my soul in someone else’s
I want to have my insides poured out
Hot and aching and alive.
Because I never knew it would be that short.
I should have stored it up, canned it,
Laid in reserves for this bitter lonely winter.
I just really really adore those few lines.
A great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx
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