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The Perfect Puzzle
Contributed by
KaylaNoelHohn
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 01:30:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I was looking up at the sky today while we were driving. The clouds looked like a puzzle trying to fit together without searching around for its missing pieces... Down the road, there was no more puzzle. It found its way together and became a solid blue sky. The bluest sky Id seen in a while. He asked me what i was looking at.. I only shrugges, and said Blue.
The Rest of the ride was quiet. Nothing to have been said by either of us. The silence blocked everything out. For a second i forgot about everything wrong in my life, and smiled.
Shortly to realize i wasnt alone, and the smile quickly faded back into the usual stare of confusion.
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KaylaNoelHohn
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2005-10-14 13:30:51]
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Re: The Perfect Puzzle
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by remote on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 01:58:39 PM AEST
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| Lovely story, well told. |
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Re: The Perfect Puzzle
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 02:30:40 PM AEST
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wow i think you need a vacation by your self great story
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Re: The Perfect Puzzle
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 03:50:27 PM AEST
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Perhaps I should be a passenger on a drive with you.Then I would see the world through your eyes.
I'm sure I would enjoy it
Steve |
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