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Lucy down the lane
Contributed by
jonteD
on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 02:49:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I catch myself daydreaming of you,
Realise my hands reaching in thin air,
Outstretched for the woman I knew,
But I snatch it back as youre not there.
On bad days I wrap my arms around me,
Find the tears rolling over my cheek,
Hope nobody is around my tears to see,
For a grown man Im acting quite meek.
Dance alone, feel the cold of emptiness around,
Gone the days of heart missing beat,
Smiling faces, holding hands west end town,
Knowing that this was the best Id ever meet.
Should I tear up the pictures from that time,
Erase the memory, forget your name,
Photos gone, negatives implanted in my mind,
All because I loved you Lucy down the lane.
Copyright ©
jonteD
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2005-10-14 14:49:44]
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Re: Lucy down the lane
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 03:02:23 PM AEST
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very nice write interesting poem
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Re: Lucy down the lane
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 03:46:25 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Jon.... really heartfelt!! BUT WHO THE HECK IS LUCY!!!!! (You've got some explaining to do!!)
Lmao..Hugs
LL |
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Re: Lucy down the lane
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by djs on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:01:50 PM AEST
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| i liked this a lot. i have been down that road, wondering if you should try to erase a lost love from your life. either it is hard. best of luck. |
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Re: Lucy down the lane
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th November 2011 @ 01:11:41 PM AEST
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| this is touching. it's perfectly put. i liked it. it's sad. you have a way with words. i understand this. |
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