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MIcro chip child
Contributed by
mindset
on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:58:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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The age of the system dawn
Our children a computer world
To shape a memory shift
What we thought we should
And never became
They will educate a world membraine
Outside our window
Nothing but electric rain
Looking in the mirror
Our past nothing but
A vector last
To see the code
A lonely constraint
To develop the hex
And only flame
Before a texture lost
An only friend
A 64 bit texture
So much we loved and lost
Copyright ©
mindset
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2005-10-14 17:58:25]
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Re: MIcro chip child
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 03:17:06 AM AEST
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Evolution need not be organic.
I like this piece.
Its so...futuristic and realistic...
There seems to be some figurative language, symbolic of growth? Or perhaps decline?
Regardless, I adored this piece, well done.
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