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Lost
Contributed by
DamentedSuicide
on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:30:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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An essence of beauty long lost
Layng in the dark
All but decaying
Frequent Smiles
Tourchered hearts
Long nights
Waisted on waiting
Blood spilled
On worthless lies
countless tears
Self inflicted hate
Slowing heart rate
Images contorted
Damned souls
Sinful fights
Of whats wrong
or right
Hopless
Lost messiah
Copyright ©
DamentedSuicide
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2005-10-14 19:30:15]
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Re: Lost
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by crazy on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:48:41 PM AEST
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| i like your flow its so nice to read a poem that has good rhyming good write |
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Re: Lost
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 08:36:06 PM AEST
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Re: Lost
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 02:18:44 AM AEST
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wow this is very powerful and i love the flow of this.. it just flows so smooth great job
JENNITTUDE |
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