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Frolic In The Moonlight
Contributed by
Willofree
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 12:11:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A full moon, with an eerie glow
Shadows cast
The fragrance of salt sea air
Sound of gentle surf rolling in
Water lapping at our feet
Alone together at last
Hand in hand, on the beach, we strolled
Side-glances and playful smiles
Emotion intensifying all the while
Playfully she pushed me
Subsequently, she took off running down the beach
Squealing with laughter as I approached
Sand so soft and warm under foot
As I caught her we tripped
And fell to the ground
Frolicking in the sand
Then on a dare we stripped
And into the surf we ran
So free we felt
Embracing each other lovingly
As we kissed and clung together
Spellbound, we stared up at the magnificent full moon
It felt as if the goddess of love was dropping by
Passion built and we sought a private spot
She whispered to me
"We're acting like a couple of kids"
We laughed and made love in the moonligiht
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Willofree
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2005-10-15 12:11:59]
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Re: Frolic In The Moonlight
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 02:18:20 PM AEST
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*grins*
Isn't that the best? I sure hope this is based on a true story! If not, make it happen, everyone needs that experience at least once : )
This poem is playfully sensual, and visually captivating. The flow sweeps the reader along. Very good job Will.
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Re: Frolic In The Moonlight
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by brew on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 03:06:10 PM AEST
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Age.......is ONLY a #.......free as anyone can be, is never a bad thing.........Loved this write......has so much to the imagination........Yes, to have someone like that and to act like that is wonderful.! Always feel, you can frolic.
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Re: Frolic In The Moonlight
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 03:35:59 PM AEST
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Yeah Terry !!!! Just .... Yeah !!!
I would say you appear to have gotten a handle on free verse, sir. A good handle at that. Well penned.
Nazzy ~
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Re: Frolic In The Moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 04:11:47 PM AEST
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| i cant say im very old but i do believe you are never to old to have your fun..this is a very good poem..keep it up |
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Re: Frolic In The Moonlight
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by absolutspin on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 04:50:58 PM AEST
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| I really like this...i need to play on the beach...but in a creepy way it reminds me of the opening of Jaws...except none gets eaten by sharks...maybe thats why i haven't gone skinny dipping in the ocean at night...i'm scarred |
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Re: Frolic In The Moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 05:59:43 PM AEST
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How utterly inspiring will !!! This was wonderful. Sweet
and fun and just faintly naughty. And I agree with scorp...
I do hope this was inspired by an experience ; )
*Truly truly loved this!*
~Breezy |
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Re: Frolic In The Moonlight
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by Dralion on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 11:55:25 AM AEST
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Though I'm only 30, I'm becoming aware that I'm getting OLD.
This poem reminds me that age is only a measure of time, not of anything else. |
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