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Sweet Dreams
Contributed by
JustAGirl001
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:50:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Running,
Screaming,
Scrambling through the thorns.
Crying,
Wishing,
Dreaming for a better day.
Running from myself,
I'm at a dead end,
I turn around,
To face my fate.
Everything goes black,
and I wake up,
with blood on my sheets,
the only sign of my defeat.
Copyright ©
JustAGirl001
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2005-10-15 21:50:51]
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Re: Sweet Dreams
(User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:01:19 PM AEST
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| this is short and dark like its meaning very nicely writen killer poem |
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Re: Sweet Dreams
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:11:44 PM AEST
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wow... very dark. i trully enjoyed reading this, it was well written. well done. just hope you find some light b4 total defeat. keep up the good writing!
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Re: Sweet Dreams
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:11:46 AM AEST
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| Great title for your poem, I enjoyed this! |
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