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pickin up the pieces of my heart and gluing it back together
Contributed by
cutestmofo
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:21:58 PM in AEST
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BROKEN
Ive done it Ive gotten rid of the shackles of love
The strands that bind me to you and the feeling above
But even as I let go of this weight
My heart went down with, it call it fate
Im hear like a foolish orphan waiting for her return
But she isnt coming back that my lesson learn
If I used to fly then now Im grounded without you
Im suffering a broken heart see what Im going through
It like a disease it eats away at u till u has nothing left
No more soul no more heart not even a piece of Ur former self
But the longer you stay away
The more my heart breaks with each passing day
Im gluing it back but it wont last forever
Like a broken glass put back together dat breaks under the weight of a feather
But it can never come back together because she stole the pieces
And left me with a scatter heart and lost wishes
But Im healing from the gaping wound of love it use to burn so bad
Now I cant remember the day I was sad
In the game of life Im going strong
Taking each step and moving on
by Kerwin Etienne
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Re: pickin up the pieces of my heart and gluing it back together
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:30:49 PM AEST
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oh, i liked this write!! very well done! and i'm glad that you can move on. and glue doesn't hold together unless you can find some Super Glue and use Duct Tape as a backup. so go shopping!!! ; ) but, really. i'm sorry you had to through this pain. but if she never loved you, then she doesn't deserve you. you can do better than that!! and i hope that someday (hopefully soon) you find the right girl for you that you love and loves you back!! but great write, i truly enjoyed it. keep up the good work!!
sending you luck in healing
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Re: pickin up the pieces of my heart and gluing it back together
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:53:59 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful and expressive write.. i enjoyed it and can relate to this at a time myself .. well put into words.. that is so true we all hurt and go through pain and always have to pick up the pieces and put them together again.. but awesome job keep writing
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