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Land of dreams
Contributed by
sarankrish
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 01:02:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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As I lay down to close my eyes
Fantasy and inspiration flies
I try to relax and to free my mind
So I can leave everything behind
Pictures circle round my head
Some are good, some a bad
I loose control as it seems
And I start living in the land of dreams
I'm moving on as I fall asleep
My memories of love I try to keep
I see a world of happiness
There's no pain, there's no stress
Children playing in the summer sun
Dancing people having fun
A world of love at it seems
When you're living in the land of dreams
Copyright ©
sarankrish
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2005-10-16 01:02:39]
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Re: Land of dreams
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by DreamPoetess on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 01:26:30 AM AEST
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your poem is pretty, you took me on your journey of dreams, it relaxed me to watch you relax , i like how you drew a picture for us, to show what you dream of.
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Re: Land of dreams
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:04:59 AM AEST
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
nice dreams.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Land of dreams
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by remote on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:58:42 AM AEST
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| Enjoyed reading this poem. |
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Re: Land of dreams
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by tinamarie on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 07:26:00 AM AEST
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Its an excellent poem!!!
I think everyone dreams of better days and
better places to be!!!
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Re: Land of dreams
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:06:48 AM AEST
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| Nice poem, I sometimes wish my dreams were more like that, but alas, I'm more prone to nightmares. |
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Re: Land of dreams
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:23:39 PM AEST
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a dream is better than reality as long as one remains asleep, and this dream would be
worth sleeping 4ever for, lovely writting.
Ben |
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Re: Land of dreams
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:38:40 AM AEST
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| The title drew me in.Its a nice poem..O.k. with same title I too posted a poem.. Best of luck. venkat |
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Re: Land of dreams
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 01:29:24 AM AEST
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| Very well done! |
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