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Emotions in rhyme
Contributed by
xoXOSaDiEOXox
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 05:13:31 AM in AEST
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Dark feelings,
Deep within,
Shutting my eyes,
Blocking out the din,
Mythical tales lost in time,
Swinging in circles,
Lost in rhyme,
Alas I try,
But alas I fail,
What is the point,
In this nocturnal tale?
Footsteps following footsteps tied,
Shall I not find,
What they do hide?
My emotions,
Dipping high and low,
Twisting this way and that,
Ending up in a bow.
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xoXOSaDiEOXox
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2005-10-16 05:13:31]
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Re: Emotions in rhyme
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by tinamarie on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 06:27:26 AM AEST
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| I liked your poem it's a little mysterious but your feelings are a confusing thing sometimes I know I think we've all been there! |
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Re: Emotions in rhyme
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:01:40 AM AEST
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| I'm certainly familiar with the darker feelings, as you can tell by my poetry, Keep writing! |
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Re: Emotions in rhyme
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by remote on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:21:21 PM AEST
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| Nice flow, as a poem, lets just say that there is nothing new said here or whatever that has been said before, said in a better way. You will get better. |
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