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Past
Contributed by
xfaggotx
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 07:15:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I know it's over
but I can't leave
the thought makes me cry
I can never say goodbye
I cant't be strong
and forget it all
the pain weighs me down
and turns into fear
in my mind it's still yesterday
it went by so fast
more then half my life gone
by living in the past
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Re: Past
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by tinamarie on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 07:17:52 AM AEST
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great poem
I really can relate to it |
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Re: Past
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 03:36:09 PM AEST
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I wish I was a stronger person....
Nicely said...
Jenni |
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Re: Past
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by Kellros on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:39:15 PM AEST
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Yes, denying the present has consequences,
would ask yourself before making such a decision if you're willing to carry the luggage that comes with the bridge? :P |
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Re: Past
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by kpsniper2003 on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 02:16:49 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem keep up the good work |
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Re: Past
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by Kazzy1231 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:07:38 PM AEST
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| Nice write,Please check out some of my poems! |
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