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Only Wishing
Contributed by
LittleMissWonderful
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:00:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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There I was, siting... waiting
Wishing, listening...
I wanted you here. I needed you here.
You couldn't be here.
Where have you been for the last 5 months?
Where has our love gone?
It use to be so strong.
My eyes are swollen. I can't cry anymore.
I just want to scream at you. Tell you I hate you.
In reality I love you.
I can't hurt you, but I want to.
I wished for simplicity.
I recieved heartache.
Now I'm wishing for a break,
But I know I'll get a lifetime of pain.
Do my feelings really mean nothing?
There isn't anyone else to hold me.
There isn't anyone else to make me laugh.
Love, you were all I had.
There I was, siting... waiting
Wishing, listening...
I wanted you here. I needed you here.
You couldn't be here.
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LittleMissWonderful
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2005-10-16 12:00:56]
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Re: Only Wishing
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:52:12 PM AEST
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How long it takes you, means nothing, I write a lot of my stuff in less then five minutes, that you put your emotion and feeling into its all that counts.Great write.
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Re: Only Wishing
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by KaylaNoelHohn on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 05:55:27 PM AEST
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| This may be simple and may have been written in 3 minutes, but i enjoyed it.. |
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Re: Only Wishing
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by crazy on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 07:44:39 PM AEST
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ok i loved this i think it is an awsome poem
i write some of my best stuff in less then5 or 6 minutes
good write |
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Re: Only Wishing
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 09:41:26 AM AEST
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Re: Only Wishing
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 09:46:10 AM AEST
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| It's hard for me to tell you what a great writer you are when your subject is so...painful...but you really are. |
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