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Sometimes
Contributed by
Chilibear
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:28:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sometimes I get so angry,
I put my fist through the wall.
Sometimes I feel so close,
To giving you a call.
I love you and I hate you,
All at the same time.
I pray that you'll come back to me...
Before I lose my mind.
Copyright ©
Chilibear
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2005-10-16 12:28:33]
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Re: Sometimes
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by remote on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:14:06 PM AEST
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| Nice one, it must hurt, putting fist through the wall, i mean. |
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Re: Sometimes
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by jheng on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:36:39 PM AEST
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| nice poem, hope he'll come before you fall out of love ... |
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Re: Sometimes
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 03:03:10 PM AEST
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| Going through something similar, so i can relate to it. It seems like theres so much more to say on the topic. Perhaps expanding this one a bit might make it even better, but it was still good nevertheless. Nice write |
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Re: Sometimes
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by Zee on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:26:20 AM AEST
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So much said in so less words! Plz. be patient and u will be rewarded soon! Very nice write!
Zee |
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Re: Sometimes
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:34:33 AM AEST
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| very nice write, just a lil friendly advice, i have been there if they come back don't let your heart do it all, keep a sharp eye, sometimes when they come back, things are worse than having them gone. |
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