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Imperfection
Contributed by
SlavicBlackBird
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:01:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I wanted to write you the perfect poem,
Becuase I wanted you to know how I feel,
Something that everyone can understnad,
To show them this is the real deal,
But all I could come up with,
Is this dischorded, disjointed mess,
But at least it says what I wanted it to,
And embodies my happiness.
I'm not the most emotional person,
Well not around people anyway,
I like to keep it all locked away,
But found out it could be my downfall,
I don't tell people how much I love you,
To be honest I don't feel the need,
Tehy already know, and can tell by my deeds,
But what about those who don't know me,
Well i'll wear your ring on my finger,
And in my heart and mind you will linger,
Becuase then it's clear for all to see.
I've never smiled so much in my life,
Though through all my hardship and strife,
I tried to find somewhere to hide,
But soon my happiness died,
Now I smile all the day and night,
And for you heart to the death I would fight,
Knowing you are there for me is a grand reason,
For me to laugh and to smile no matterwhat the season.
I must admit I never thought,
Someone could love this broken fool.
Who, to be heosnt is used like a mule,
By all who know and "care",
As a song I once heard did say,
"You say it's bad luck to have fallen for me"
Thats all I heard, and start to see,
This decrepid soul is supposed to be lonely,
Who could lvoe a creature so hidious outside,
As she is warm and caring on the inside,
An imperfection on this earth.
But now long gone are the days,
When I thought in those ways,
I still can't see why you love me so,
You promise me you will never go,
You say you'll stya by myy side,
And from danger, me you will hide,
And it fills me with happines and glee,
To have you always with me.
So i'll make my final declaration,
For all the world to see and understand,
You're the one I want to be with,
The one I will treasure for all my life,
And for you I have the greatest admiration,
You have my heart soul and hand,
To you my life I will give,
And cast away my strife.
For it is you that I love and who doth love me in return.
(c) Tammy Thorpe 2005
Copyright ©
SlavicBlackBird
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Re: Imperfection
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:44:06 PM AEST
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Well thats great, I'm glad you found the one, and anyone would be lucky to have someone who cares this much, good luck in the future and congrads. Great write.
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Re: Imperfection
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by vampyrekiss on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:13:15 PM AEST
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That is totaly awsome it was so sweet. great write and congrats on finding them :)
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