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Fishees Underwater
Contributed by
daprdan
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Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:20:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Fish have many, pretty colors, they live beneath the waves,
Some fish seem, to swim in schools, and then some live in caves,
Some are short, and some are small, and some are stringy thin,
Some of them, are wide and tall, and some just dig right in.
There's not much light, beneath the waves, of all our great big seas,
But all the fish, don't seem to mind, they somehow still can see,
Plants live down there, under water, they make things seem so nice,
That all the fishes, dance around, and always check things twice.
Some of us, can swim right down there, others say they won't,
Some of us, seem unafraid, the others they just don't,
Some fish have, large shiny teeth, some have none at all,
Some of them, swim hastily, while others only crawl.
Of all the fish, and animals, my favorite is a star fish,
Whenever I find one, on the beach, I stop and make a wish,
I pick them up, and put them back, far out into the ocean,
And hope they learn, to not return, or repeat that silly notion
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Re: Fishees Underwater
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by remote on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 12:52:26 AM AEST
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Re: Fishees Underwater
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by DreamPoetess on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 05:54:41 PM AEST
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smiles, I love this fish story. I think you could draw a fish, your imagination, and there would be one just like it out there in the sea. Everytime I went fishing, the bigs ones jump up on the other side of a river, and laugh at me. One day, I will catch him lol:> I like star fish too. Never thought to wish upon a star fish, I like that, sensitive ending, save a starfish:>
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Re: Fishees Underwater
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by Evening_Star on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 05:56:32 PM AEST
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I really liked your fishee story. As i read it i smiled and reminded me of when i was a child.
liz |
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