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mother why?
Contributed by
highseas57
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 12:18:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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mother when happiness went walking you took it away?
you injected my children with hate leaving them innocent prey
for the wicked.mother why?im leaving your womb,its to full
of biterness,hate and emotional rage.mother when i was young
there was only one egg for the kill of us four siblings,sometimes i won but mostly i lost.my stomach grumbling as i fall asleep,mother why?every time i tried to show you i love you
the only response i got was the black rose,you destroyed all my dreams.up until now
you see mother im leaving the womb,were there are no implants of mental illness.
before i go mother please tell me why?
julie ann mcginnis
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Re: mother why?
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by crazy on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:19:47 AM AEST
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what a poem !
this is how your supposed to wrie poems from the heart wow
this has your heart all over it amazing job
xoxo crazy |
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Re: mother why?
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 05:46:23 AM AEST
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Good write. I find poetry is great therapy. ;o) I really liked the line "you see mother I'm leaving the womb, where there are no implants of mental illness." Great imagery. Peace to ya!
Thumper ;O) |
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