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use caustion in the gardens
Contributed by
ddannyc
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:32:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I stop t abmire the beauty of a rose.
Each one is the same but uniqe.
Graceing my sences and intreging the mind.
I hold the flowers I find to be the most beautifull only to wilt in my hands.
I let go!.
Leaveing my self traped in a bed of thorns.
Realizing the pain underneath the beauty.
Every thorn is the same.
Uniqely placed along her stem they peirce deeply into the flesh of my soul at all angles.
Each cut is the same but ,reviling differnt shades of red.
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Re: use caustion in the gardens
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by emystar on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:39:11 AM AEST
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Welcome danny to our global family here.
Good write and so true.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: use caustion in the gardens
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by crazy on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 05:59:03 AM AEST
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i love your dynamic view of life a beautiful way to put it
nice write |
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Re: use caustion in the gardens
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by cryingonmyporch on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:01:37 PM AEST
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It seems all the same but never really which in a way makes some sense and then not. Great write.
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