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TAKE THESE TEARS
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 04:38:15 AM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
Sitting alone in my heart.
Let this inner sorrow die.
Let luv yearningly run free
Don't wonna sit alone to cry.
Take these tears oh great spirit
Turn them to your un-dying luv.
Turn on your heavenly faucet
Wash our planet from heaven above.
Send someone to share this load.
Bathe us in your spirit free.
Lead this vessle to your light
Make a change, start in me.
Oh Father you stand by me
in joy, luv or great sorrow.
Without you I'd be gone.
still you always bring tommorow.
Take my insecurities dear one
Turn them to your perfect will
Let heavens light blink on
Carry me to the top of your hill.
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emystar
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by crazy on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 05:55:07 AM AEST
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sorry for your friend
but thins has so mant great elements i love the pic beautiful and the music really lets you focus on the poem as you are reading it very nice touch
your poem shows great feelings
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:10:25 AM AEST
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Oh my dear Emy, condolences on the loss of ur friend. May their soul rest in peace. They'll be watching over u my dear friend.
A heavenly beautiful write composed by a very talented poetess. God bless ur heart Emy.
*heartfelt hugs 4 u*
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by thumper on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:45:54 AM AEST
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This is so heart-achingly beautiful. Sorry about your friend. The poem, music and pics all add up to a great write. Kudos to you!
Thumps ;o) |
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:14:32 AM AEST
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| Great write,well done! |
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by cryingonmyporch on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 01:56:06 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. Sometime we wish that we could have someone help us carry such pain.
Love the native sounding music and the pic.
Amy~ |
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 08:15:06 AM AEST
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It hurts the ones who are left behind Emy. I am so sorry for the loss of ur friend. The ones will love are with us in spirit.
Beautiful
(((HUGS)))
Love Angelxxe |
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 12:16:56 PM AEST
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Oh Emystar this is so very b eautiful and touching. I am aggrieved to hear you lost a friend.
But, the departed loved ones are always with us although we do not see them.
Love never dies. They wait for us on the other side.
What a beautiful lovihg tribute to your friend She surely is all smiles and so proud of you.
and your beautiful song. for her..
Love and peace
Elizabeth |
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 01:58:35 AM AEST
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**************
Oh Father you stand by me
in joy, luv or great sorrow.
Without you I'd be gone.
still you always bring tommorow.
Emy, is this the beautiful friend who was sick in the hospital... my heart is heavy, my prayers were strong.. if so, the Lord will take care of her...of us Emy... I am so very sorry...Lord take our tears...yes and wash us all...but we are not alone Emy..never... alone... I love you...a beautiful love prayer song for your dear friend, from you a friend of mine as well, because of our friendship, you give me so much care.. I promise I will not stop praying, for I have to keep fueled up, so that I can give, give, give...until I can't any longer..
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 04:51:29 PM AEST
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I really like this, Emy..
It's so very sad, but lovely at the same time.
It seems almost like a plea, and I really do hope that your wish is granted.
Great write, my friend,
I'm sorry for your loss.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 10:20:43 PM AEST
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I am back after a while... and whether I was here or not... you and your writing was always something that I could easily remember. Now I am back... now I am reading your delightfull poems again.
I;m sorry about your friend. I have never had to face the death of a friend... and it must be hard to explain the feelings you have... but you do it and I can feel your pain. There's one line I especially love...
"Send someone to share this load"
If only that could happen... that would be so great. It's so often that I wonder something like this.
I love your writes... I always will... and I haven't alked to you in sooo long... so I hope all is well with you. |
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 07:04:26 PM AEST
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I must say Emy, this piece is deeply introspective, and quietly reflective. There's a moving quality to this write that the reader can immediately relate to. This has got to be one of my favourites I've read by you...Very well done.
Hope you have a wonderful Xmas, and even better new year : )
Scorp. |
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by BondiDan on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 02:34:27 AM AEST
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very beautifully written
so touching, you are a very very talented poet i love your works!
Merry Christmas and have a Fantastic New Year!
Keep Well
BondiDan |
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Re: TAKE THESE TEARS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:40:05 AM AEST
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| Talented work by Emystar once again. |
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