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Eyes
Contributed by
Sezzie69
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:41:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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As the misty sun shimmers down on the murky water
I look deep into its depths of shadows and secrets,
I see myself staring back blank and lost,
The murky water is blinding, its low cloud and misty.
My body has vanished all except my head
Which I can see bobbing in the murky water.
My eyes look up at me wishing me to rescue them,
I cannot reach them from the water,
They sink deeper every time I get closer,
I fumble and grab at the water
Trying to clutch something that I just cant reach.
Copyright ©
Sezzie69
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2005-10-17 06:41:32]
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Re: Eyes
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by crazy on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 08:52:40 AM AEST
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| what a kool poem i lovd it |
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Re: Eyes
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:12:06 AM AEST
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| Good write! |
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Re: Eyes
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 06:06:30 AM AEST
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This piece speaks to me of futility. Good write.
Peace.
Thumper ;o) |
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