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progression
Contributed by
Caged Soul
on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 07:44:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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inception, beginning, offset,
new, fresh, pure, clean, dumb,
naive, green, beknowing, truth,
discovery, shock, shortcoming,
different, wrong, stray, false-hearted,
grey, distraught, hate, suffering,
pain, stained, foul, stale, troubled,
unworthy, degraded, exploited,
red, turning point, decision,
correction, judgement, endeavour,
returning, brown, elevated, lifted,
peace, love, fulfilment, reward,
destiny, gold.
Copyright ©
Caged Soul
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2005-10-17 07:44:22]
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Re: progression
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by Stonedraider23 on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:07:07 AM AEST
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| ummm was odd |
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Re: progression
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by remote on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:57:25 PM AEST
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| I was intending to do something like this, but thought it was a bit ambititious so will attempt it later. This one didn't work out well because the words as presented doesn't evoke any image, emotional or otherwise. Good that you are trying out new things. |
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Re: progression
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 08:25:13 AM AEST
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That certainly is something new. I haven’t seen a concept like that before. It somehow needs more to fully comprehend the poem to fully understand the words you just wrote.
Jane~ |
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Re: progression
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by aprilrose on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 04:17:46 AM AEST
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didnt quite understand it lots of every emotion
but didnt seem to have enough body to it to know what is going on with it but i liked the concept and the difference of it cause it is defenetly like nothing i have ever read so for that i have to say nicely done makes heads spin :)aprilrose |
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Re: progression
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by 2bpositive on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 11:04:59 AM AEST
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out of site
out of mind
out of words
you would never find
An interesting good job.
I would have called your poem,
"just letting go"
A thumbs up to you! |
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