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The lonely beach
Contributed by
Kazzy1231
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:32:52 AM in AEST
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Why is this the lonely beach?
Maybe it is just out of reach.
Is it because of the time of year.
Why no1 is here?
Does any1 come here in summer?
Maybe just the drummer.
There are lots of boats on the sea.
But the beach is empty.
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Re: The lonely beach
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 11:25:04 PM AEST
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Some one stept onto the beach today
It was perfect and so beautiful
It was night time, they went alone
They walked along the shore
Bear feet steping on the sand
feeling the waves wash the foot steps away
When they were gone there was not trace
No proof that any one was there
But how do I know that somone was there
Because that some one was me |
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Re: The lonely beach
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 12:15:21 PM AEST
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| I didn't go on the beach. |
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Re: The lonely beach
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by Gentlemanpoet on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 08:11:33 AM AEST
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| I really love the beach, especially in the Caribbean. You sound like you are alone in life or maybe in your mind. You are not alone, and somewhere there is a friend just for you. I wish for thee love. |
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