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Same
Contributed by
Scarletrayne
on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 11:20:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Your just like them.
Your just like her.
Everyone's the same.
I've lost this stupid game,
thought it would hurt more
when I did, was moreso
hoping I wouldn't.
Shattered hopes,
Tattered dreams,
Forgotten desires,
it's all the same.
Copyright ©
Scarletrayne
... [
2005-10-17 11:20:11]
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Re: Same
(User Rating: 1 )
by Angelochek on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 02:15:43 AM AEST
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Im glad your writting poetry, but maybe next time you could express yourself and your thoughts a little bit better. Just some advice for better poetry.
Keep on writting........ |
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