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In the Dark Crimson Moonlight
Contributed by
Dark_and_Cold
on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 12:22:54 PM in AEST
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Sanguine June, bleeding moon
Light drips down like Blood
Evil rite, scattered blight
Light flows down in a flood
Eerie sight, red-stained night
Light is all I see
Cold Shiver, Crimson river
Light splashes down on me
Tattered vision, jagged incision
Light splatters all around
Amber flashes, angry gashes
Light shatters upon the ground
Scarlet silence, muted violence
Light has become my bane
Darkness shining, intertwining
Light is driving me insane.
Starless sky, flying by
Night has murdered the day
Sanity passes, with rose-tinted glasses
Night is here to stay
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Re: In the Dark Crimson Moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 12:28:49 PM AEST
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lol aren't you just a happy little soul, amazing write, personally I can't rhyme if my life depended on it, but you did an awesome job.
Great write can't wait to see more.
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Re: In the Dark Crimson Moonlight
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:09:02 PM AEST
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| nive very nice.You did really well on this one. |
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Re: In the Dark Crimson Moonlight
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 03:05:36 PM AEST
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| very dark, it flowed nicely as well. |
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Re: In the Dark Crimson Moonlight
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by crazy on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 05:49:21 PM AEST
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dark oh so adrk i alway wish i could rhyme but i cant you say thing in a way that are truely amazing
i loved it it is one of the best dark poems ive read
rocken job |
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Re: In the Dark Crimson Moonlight
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by brew on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 05:54:37 PM AEST
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Hm......This one is dark......Yet there are some deep thoughts that are pondering throughout, your mind.! Not bad.......All do not have to be care free and flowing, and some do not even have to make sense. We write, with the soul.
Brew~ |
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Re: In the Dark Crimson Moonlight
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 06:49:51 AM AEST
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I love the imagery that you have put into this write. WOW! Totally enjoyable read. I really liked the line "Night has murdered the day" Kool. Look forward to reading more of your poetry. Great R/R. Kudos!
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: In the Dark Crimson Moonlight
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by DreamPoetess on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 06:43:37 PM AEST
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The light has cursed me, lol, to death, reading it, I saw dracula fighting this lighted rainbow, as the colors drip down. this must be him looking at false reality, through his rose shaded glasses. Hopefully, lol, if it is dracula, he wil not die, night came to save his day. Drink more blood Drakkie baby, lol, maybe that will keep you alive lol. I don't know, I took a stab at it, always fun to read, I got a kick out of this one.
Great write, a lot of folks out there will have their own ideas on this one:>
Meagan |
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Re: In the Dark Crimson Moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:50:23 AM AEST
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| HOLY CRAP!!! Thsi rocked like none before Vamprire Queen better watch out, you're taking over her turff. it;s okay though, she took it from me and so on. |
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Re: In the Dark Crimson Moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 02:07:04 AM AEST
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| wow this is a great poem. i wish i could write something as good as this |
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Re: In the Dark Crimson Moonlight
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 10:18:46 PM AEST
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Good rhythm and rhymes, though it makes as much sense as easter does, the ending was good but i really dont think this was "dark".
~Clark |
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