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Have you?
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 03:49:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Time...
I can't hold it on my own
My smiles last as long as gone
I miss pills and candy
Silence...
I can't hear it on my own
I want my heart to settle down
I miss pills and candy
Memory...
I can't forget what just won't let
I'm lonely now like puddles wet
I miss pills and candy
Whispers...
I can't remember how to hear
my need for sweets is bittersweet
I miss pills and candy
Have you had the need for suffering
to know that you still are?
Have you felt your art become your blood
and have it spill out way too far?
Have you ever felt the setting sun
and know that now you're cold?
Have you?
dw
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Re: Have you?
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by weepingprophet on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 07:08:49 PM AEST
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my favorite part "have you ever felt your art become your blood, and have it spill out way too far?" it's delicate but descriptive and it just struck a chord in me. Fantastic write
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Re: Have you?
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 05:08:16 PM AEST
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| i think the stanza "have you felt your art become your blood and have it spill out way too far?" strikes a nerve in poets or any type of artist with more than what they write....very nicely written. |
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