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Spring Tide
Contributed by
ChibiMiroku
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Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:06:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Whats this strange pull
This newfound urge
To do something reckless
That makes my hackles surge?
This want of wanton violence
Feeds the urge to feed
My own self reflections
And stop the increasing need.
I know this feelings wrong
I can feel it in my bones
I can but wonder to how many others
This feeling gave gravestones.
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ChibiMiroku
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2005-10-17 18:06:16]
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Re: Spring Tide
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:28:43 PM AEST
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An outstanding piece crafted so well.
I like the way you've presented this. I feel there is more to it than what your letting on.
A powerful, moving and remarkable write. Chin up sweet friend and may ur heart see brighter days.
*hugs*
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