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On Clouds, Moon, or Perhaps Mars?
Contributed by
remote
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Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 02:07:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The sky, tonight
is blue
Mars lurking
just below
the full moon
Clouds
so evanescent
just a wisps, scattered
like my thoughts
there, yet, almost not there.
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2005-10-18 14:07:52]
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Re: On Clouds, Moon, or Perhaps Mars?
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 07:19:09 PM AEST
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It's so hard to get there. Isn't it. Perhaps it is meant to be so meant to pass through darkness and clouds.
The soul strives and strives and it is imperative.that she keep striving.
Thanks for sharing deep thoughts.
Elizabeth |
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Re: On Clouds, Moon, or Perhaps Mars?
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by brew on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 09:28:51 PM AEST
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So where are they?! Hm...... Well, perhaps, in the clouds, their self.! Good write, J.
Brew~ |
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Re: On Clouds, Moon, or Perhaps Mars?
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 06:42:23 AM AEST
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Very beautifull thoughts.
huggs,
emy
huggs,
emy |
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Re: On Clouds, Moon, or Perhaps Mars?
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:49:21 PM AEST
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| I like the way you flow |
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