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A Word Of Hope
Contributed by
justice
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Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 03:02:42 PM in AEST
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Through the deep dark eyes of my son
I can see the golden sun
Rising up
Bringing warmth
Through a brilliant smile
Wiping away darkness
The dew drops evaporate
LIfe is awake
The dawn chorus begins
Acknowleging HIm, The King
The day breaks
The day begins
Today's the day of reckoning
Today's the day of remembering
The sunlight kisses my face
The world is still spinning
The clocks hands refuse to rest
The sun shall rise
The sun shall set
I hope I remember
I hope I forget
Do I know any regrets?
Through the deep dark brown eyes of my son
I can see the brilliant sun
Rising up.
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Re: A Word Of Hope
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 05:11:28 PM AEST
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Well, the concept is simple, but it works. The visuals I got from your words was worth the read...
I like the positive ending, and these three lines just spoke volumes to me:
I hope I remember
I hope I forget
Do I know any regrets?
Nice job!
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