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Determination
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 03:42:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Determination
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As the cold air
Pierces my lungs
I travel on
To an undetermined area
Nothing for protection
But the clothes on my back
I stare fear
Straight in the eye
Where my destination leads
I must follow
I must be willing to risk
It all
Doubts I must cast aside
And battle the demon
Inside me
Before it destroys
All that I am
Determined
I press on
Into parts unknown
Familiarity is a curse
A trap
I mustnt be fooled
For danger lurks
If I step off path
If I become vulnerable
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Lifes Unforeseen Road
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Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2005-10-19 15:42:51]
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Re: Determination
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 03:49:41 PM AEST
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Thank you, Jeff for sharing this bit of wisdom with us. It is very much needed and appreciated right about now...
Jenni |
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Re: Determination
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 06:14:38 PM AEST
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It's really good, and mysterious too. I thought
the ending was especially strong, with Life's
Unforeseen Road ahead of us all.
Keep it up!! |
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