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Binding Whispers
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:28:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She lost what she had found
What she always thought she'd need
A thin veneer of strength
The answer was to bleed
He found the way through
Love pierced her more
Than even her sharpest blade
Had ever reached before
Even his lightest touch
Invokes the fire pain
All of his soft whispers
Drip tears that fall like rain
A heightened, glowing pleasure
That brought her to her knees
And when his presence bound her
She was begging for release
She feels the world at last
As if a newborn life
Opened new in every way
His love, his slave, his wife.
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_Raspberry_
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2005-10-20 12:28:19]
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Re: Binding Whispers
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 12:37:34 PM AEST
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| wow..this is a great write. good flow....and very interesting and a touch of sad.... |
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Re: Binding Whispers
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 01:31:40 PM AEST
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Heart-wrenching and saddening.... but my God,
it's extremely well written. With clever rhyme and
flow you emphasized every emotion to it's utmost.
Amazing. Keep up the superb writing. |
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Re: Binding Whispers
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 05:00:46 PM AEST
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Great work..loved it
Jenni |
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Re: Binding Whispers
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by Emptymyth on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 02:18:46 PM AEST
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| Wonderful |
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Re: Binding Whispers
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:11:15 PM AEST
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| a lovely read and I love the title. |
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