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Old new feelings
Contributed by
joe
on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 01:03:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Aye, I see you
Did you think I'd forget
But I can still smell you
And taste you on my lips
Is it the same for you
Do I fill your thoughts
Do you wonder what I'm doing
Do you feel just as lost
The worst part is
I know you feel the same
But prior engagements
Prolong our wait
And so as still through out the years
I'm waiting for our chance
I know it's not healthy
But you told me you loved me!
Copyright ©
joe
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2005-10-20 13:03:16]
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Re: Old new feelings
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 10:20:00 PM AEST
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it makes sense to me and i think it's a good write. you still love this person and you miss them and want them back... makes sense to me... and i liked reading this, just, don't hold on too tight... then you might push the person away... but good luck at winning them back!! and keep up the good work!!
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