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Death Transcended
Contributed by
haunted_memory
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Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 05:11:04 PM in AEST
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The macabre myths
And poetry of legend
Circle, endlessly replaying
The unknown quarrel
Within my mind
Thoughts echo
Again and again
Over coarse memory cells
Pleading forgiveness
For suggesting the truth
Before sinking into
This eternal darkness
The melancholy melody
Of silent screams
Encroaches evermore
Upon the stillness
Of my soul
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haunted_memory
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2005-10-20 17:11:04]
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Re: Death Transcended
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by Cupid on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 05:41:38 PM AEST
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BRAVO, haunted_memory!
This poem is so DESCRIPTIVE! I like it!
Your poetic diction was SUPERB!
I loved the allierations! |
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Re: Death Transcended
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by crazy on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 09:29:30 PM AEST
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| amazing poem so awsome with how you describe the things in your poem loved it |
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Re: Death Transcended
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by hellsfallenangel on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 10:37:27 AM AEST
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its a very good write keep it up i want to read more please well bye bye
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