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Someone Dear...
Contributed by
ronald
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Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
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As each day marches by,
Not a soul can deny,
A battle is raging,
And never ceasing.
But a second away,
The heavy weight I lay,
Brings in the sun's ray,
Giving a better day,
Cannot put aside,
The door in my sight,
That gift from above,
Whiter than the dove.
Seen moments of gold,
Like nothing ever told,
Causing revival,
For my survival.
Placebo for my soul,
When waves, out of control,
Just cannot survive,
Without the pearl of life.
Days are so magical,
Never occasional,
Till tears turn into wings,
And heaven's bell rings.
Everyday is new,
As emptiness flew,
Light years away from here,
Because of someone dear...
Copyright ©
ronald
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2003-01-20 16:40:00]
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Re: Someone Dear...
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 06:12:30 PM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: Someone Dear...
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:43:44 AM AEST
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Awww Ronald this is beautiful....i hope whomever you wrote this for see's this one it's breathtaking....very good write ...love this one...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Someone Dear...
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 06:25:51 AM AEST
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| There is some hidden beauty in this poem. Dear Ronald. It is very nice...Venkat |
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Re: Someone Dear...
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 09:32:55 AM AEST
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Hello Ronald,
It's good to read your work again...this has the same beautiful quality as so many of yours do. I think it will take me a lot of time to catch up with your writing but I'll try.
Chrissie x |
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Re: Someone Dear...
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 03:07:55 PM AEST
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| pretty.. |
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Re: Someone Dear...
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 07:31:49 AM AEST
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fantastic wording so very moving, really enjoyed this, thanks Ronald
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Re: Someone Dear...
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:42:09 AM AEST
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| Very nicely written ronald. :) |
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