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Taking Candy from a Baby
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:20:19 PM in AEST
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With a spark
The wave that rocked the boat
Cite the authors note
A tale of thievery
Or so he once wrote
Easy
Like taking candy
From a baby
A purse from an old lady
As the definite
Turns into a maybe
Pumpkin pie
Sugar plum
Lucy in the sky
Her diamond, floatin by
I aint got none
Just this rusty old gun
Not worth a damn
Just gonna spoil the fun
In every crowd
There is always one
Who cant dance
Who wont last
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Re: Taking Candy from a Baby
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by moon_light on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:28:57 PM AEST
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| good one it makes you think. |
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Re: Taking Candy from a Baby
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:49:26 PM AEST
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Hmmm...not so sure I like the mocking tone I detect in these words...Looks like another one of your veiled writes, where you start off saying one thing, and then turn it nasty. Such a pessimist...I remember a time when many of your writes ended on a positive note.
H.S.
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Re: Taking Candy from a Baby
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by ChibiMiroku on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 09:44:15 PM AEST
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| I have a feeling there's a general message, but I'm not quite getting it. Great write, all the same. :D |
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Re: Taking Candy from a Baby
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 05:58:47 AM AEST
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i like it, well done.
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