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MOVIN' IN ON YOU
Contributed by
robertdavidson
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Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 07:11:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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'MOVIN' IN ON YOU'
by ROBERT DAVIDSON
You once tol' me jes git outta yo' hair
Said don't git so near, keep on movin'
But said don't go 'way, keep on groovin'.
Don't wanna make you cry
Don't wanna cramp yo' style
Give you space, jes let you breathe
All I'm wantin' is jes see yo' smile
Cos I'm not movin' in on you.
You once tol' me jes git outta yo' hair
Said don't git so near, keep on movin'
But said don't go 'way, keep on groovin'.
Not gunna fence you in
Not gunna crowd you out
Give you chance jes spread yo' wings.
Well, reckon you figure what I'm about
But I'm not movin' in on you.
You once tol' me jes git outta yo' hair
Said don't git so near, keep on movin'
But said don't go 'way, keep on groovin'
Don't wanna crowd yo' space
Don't wanna tear you 'part
Wantin' to jes cruise with you
Longin' for a bitty piece o' yo' heart.
Well, guess I'm jes movin' in on you.
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robertdavidson
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2005-10-22 07:11:18]
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Re: MOVIN' IN ON YOU
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 07:17:30 AM AEST
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Bravo!!!
Big smiles, betta watch it or you'll be critasized and made fun of for your spellin of words. Ha.
Very good write and I luv it.
Awesome.
big smiles, big huggs,
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Re: MOVIN' IN ON YOU
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 06:28:13 PM AEST
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Well Robert, I really like this poem. It's different to your usual style of writing, but hey it's awesome. This would do really well with some music to it. You can always produce a great poem to captivate your reader from start to finish. Keep up the great work my friend.
*hugs*
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Re: MOVIN' IN ON YOU
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 02:24:09 PM AEST
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| Yes, well done, at least you do not straddle the fence. Raquel Leah |
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