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Candlestick
Contributed by
seci
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Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 06:21:34 PM in AEST
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i got a match so therefore light me up light me up so therfore when i get into that zone all of the problems that i had i want have to worry because i'll be stoned stoned until i can care less i have an addiction so therefore i 'm trying to confess burn, burn , burn until there is nothing else to burn read me like a book until you get tired of me so your page you can turn slowly i know that my lights will go out am i afraid No when i'm ready i'll shout life is like a Bowling ball it keeps rolling until every damn pin is down why frown so therefore i ask light my candlestick and watch me burn light my candlestick until the color of it turns light my candlestick, light my candlestick and watch me go out slowly but boldly light my candlestick until there is nothing of me left light it good until i put forth into my last breath i'm stronger then any brick but my pain has became so much that i have to let it burn i have to let it burn so don't be afraid when i ask you to get a match and light me slowly light me up light me up real good light me up like you should i'm stronger then any brick light my candlestick
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Re: Candlestick
(User Rating: 1 ) by crazy on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 06:59:53 PM AEST (User
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nicely done loved how it sead let it all burn the hurt
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Re: Candlestick
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 09:31:46 PM AEST (User
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Hey,
Nice poem, i like the candlestick n i like the way you talk about letting the pain burn, most other people jus say bottle it up then swallow it n leave it to fester, burning is so absolute.
Makes me wish i could burn.
till next time,
emz |
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