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Not A Pretty Sight
Contributed by
xxSuicidalChickxx
on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 03:31:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The three-letter word
That will end her life tonight
You dont need to say it
She knows shes not a pretty sight
She starved herself for weeks
She wouldnt eat at all
Shes scared of what will happen
Shes too weak shell fall
All of this happened
Cause someone never cared
Someone didnt bother
Her life could have been spared
Shes standing there naked
Looking into the mirror
Shes lost weight from not eating
But a tears
Rolling down her check
She slides down onto the floor
She lies there in silence
She looks at the mirror more
Shes still not thin enough
She hasnt eaten for a while
She kills herself tonight
Shell never be a pretty sight
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xxSuicidalChickxx
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2005-10-23 03:31:55]
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Re: Not A Pretty Sight
(User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 04:15:25 AM AEST
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| awesome...heartbreaking but well written |
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Re: Not A Pretty Sight
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by Spike_BH on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 04:45:58 AM AEST
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| this didnt just hit my heart it. hit my soul. very moving and very well thought out. the images were so well put i could see it in my head. very nice job |
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