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Death of a lifetime
Contributed by
crazygirl
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Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 12:20:59 PM in AEST
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My death;i can see it:
soggy tissues, bloodcaked blade,
beside the cold wrist of a lost one
fear ridden eyes, finaly closing
silenced lips, punished for the lies
they used to speak
body crumpled to the floor,
my mind finally finding peace,
from the misery in life.
So here i sit awaiting the death of a lifetime......
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crazygirl
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2005-10-23 12:20:59]
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Re: Death of a lifetime
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 12:25:35 PM AEST
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Definitly an emotional piece, which tend to be the better ones. You shouldn't think that way though, just keep your chin up, better times are on the way. Great write.
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Re: Death of a lifetime
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by crazy on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:24:15 PM AEST
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wow sounds so much like me
i hope you really didnt try to kill your self thow i did twicw it dosent help trust me it just gets worst when every one knows it was you then you have to make something up like oh i was just kidden didnt really want to die
but hey loved you write its killer lol sorry had to say that loved it |
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Re: Death of a lifetime
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 09:06:32 PM AEST
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I am sorry you have been feeling this way, you know things will get better though. Remember I am here for you if you need to talk, just call me though hehe. This poem is good, really good, but really dark though.
Take care.
Scott |
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