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Contributed by
grim6669
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Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 12:59:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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screaming victims of wreckless madness,
tourtured souls of sorrow and sadness,
the living dead lies deep inside,
the hollowed trust of someones pride,
but we don't know what lies beyond,
the facts of faith will soon be gone,
don't speak what's right,just do what's wrong,
cause your spot in hell's been saved all along.
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2005-10-23 12:59:35]
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Re: ???
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 04:10:10 PM AEST
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| how come SIX people have read this so far and NO ONE has commentet?....what's up with that? |
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Re: ???
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 04:10:48 PM AEST
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| commented* |
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Re: ???
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by crazy on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:14:01 PM AEST
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absoluty loved it so dark and ohh i cant get enough of it
this is a poem that you wish there was more to
i dont really know what a good title for thsi would be but i like d it a lot kool poem |
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Re: ???
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by Coral on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 08:05:46 PM AEST
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| i totally agree!! there should be more to this poem. havent gotten any ideas as to what the title should be. sorry ;( |
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Re: ???
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by bit_me on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 11:59:20 PM AEST
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| hey Amber it's Willie I just started my account today. Cool poems. I'll have some of mune up tommorow. |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 04:46:03 PM AEST
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| I love this poem! I really hope you add more to it. great job!!! |
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Re: ???
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:35:51 PM AEST
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"Hollow Echo's" maybe "Painful Moans" or "Unchained" lol I'm not the best with names, but it's a few suggestions. Amazing write, I'm more into the darker write's myself, it seems to be all I'm good at. Hope to see more soon.
-Cassy |
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Re: ???
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 07:14:52 AM AEST
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How’s it going Amber first of all I
want to thank you for the comment
on my write. How could you read
this write and not comment. Damn
you really got me with this write girl.
It flows so well and has such a dark
side with deep meaning in so few
words. Twisted and dark and all too
often that’s how we live each day and
we do live to do what’s wrong a lot.
Nice write and keep them coming
girl….Steve
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Re: ???
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by Drmbeliever on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:51:05 PM AEST
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| I think the same way sometimes! So many try and say one thing and do another....yet in the end who knows. nice. *heather* |
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