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Goodbye Love
Contributed by
wizard
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Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 05:41:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Once again I say goodbye
To a love I've found
Said without a spoken word
A situation so profound
Our incidental love, bound to fail
We each had another tie
Though you're the only one I love
We could not live this lie
I've missed you since the day we met
Knowing that this was our fate
If only but a goodbye kiss
To mend my heart - but now, too late
Not a word you had to say
About the way you feel
Makes me wonder if this love
You claimed you had was real
Copyright ©
wizard
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2005-10-23 17:41:12]
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Re: Goodbye Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:15:21 PM AEST
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Aw, wiz, how terribly sad. It's impressive how, through
hurt and pain you can weave together something
so extraordinary. Emotive and moving write, wiz.
~Breezy |
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Re: Goodbye Love
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by Lollypopxcore on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:32:02 PM AEST
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That was so sad...
I'm so sorry.
It was a very beautiful poem though.
xoxoxo |
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Re: Goodbye Love
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by crazy on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:46:40 PM AEST
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| loved this |
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Re: Goodbye Love
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 08:05:18 PM AEST
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Awww that was beautiful but yet very sad.
awsome job on this.
hugs |
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Re: Goodbye Love
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by brew on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 10:25:12 PM AEST
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Not a good thing....when you love, and have lost.then you SEE, it was REAL! So, sorry, Paul.! I hope your heart, that needs for them to return, becomes meanded soon.! Your such a sweet person.
Always your friend,
Dayna |
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Re: Goodbye Love
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 10:55:56 PM AEST
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What a wonderfully touching write. I hope all is well.. I hope this was just fictional..
Jenni |
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Re: Goodbye Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 11:36:04 PM AEST
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Paul a sad and emaotional write that tears at ones heart. It's amazing how your heart is hurting yet you can produce an outstanding write. May your heart never see another day of sorrow my friend.
Heartfelt *hugs* for u,
Sue |
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Re: Goodbye Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 11:46:54 AM AEST
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the last line says it all a real eye opener very
nice, a tad of wonderment " Makes me wonder if the love you claimed you had was real " yes deffinately a potent peice of poetry,
nice style u have . . .
Ben |
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Re: Goodbye Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 01:11:43 PM AEST
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Ouch. Nice sting at the end there Wiz...It really drives the emotions home. Good job, and with any luck, you'll be saying 'Hello' to love again soon : )
Take care.
Scorp. |
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Re: Goodbye Love
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 11:38:50 PM AEST
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Well Bro..
I gotta apologize for lettin' this one slip by me.
I feel your pain in this..
It's been the way for you
for sometime..when it comes to those
you 'really' love or care about-
Just know, it's her loss...not yours-
Here for ya...you know that.
Great write-
Truly-
Me
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