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Pain
Contributed by
EsotericWsdm4
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Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 12:40:50 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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As an expert on pain
It is easier to minimize the pain of all others
And feed the ego of their own wound
Solace will not come to all that accept others have been in their shoes
In fact there is potential for just the opposite to occur
Dwelling on the problem then becomes the name of the game
We can not stand alone
We can not clump together
The key is to embrace the pain
So that it may be contained
Chances are, others have felt what we have felt
There is no use in comparing notes
For each of us has a different lesson to learn
10.21.05
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Re: Pain
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:42:29 PM AEST
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Nice job...very insightful, however, you could tweak your structure a little to make it more readable.
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