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If I Could Tell You Anything
Contributed by
craigcully
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Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:36:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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If I could tell you anything
What would it be
It would start with I still love you
Do you still love me
If I could ask you anything
Id ask where did I go wrong
When did the love we built
Stop and not move on
Where would I be
If you were by my side
Could I still be happy
If we gave it one more try?
I hate to think its gone
But I know its true
But its the one thing that I got
Holding on to you
Be it right, be it wrong
It gets me through the day
So I can go to sleep and act
Like you never went away
If I could tell you anything
Id keep it all inside
Cause it would hurt too much to see
It all pass me by
Maybe I let you go to easy
Maybe I should have tried
To keep us all together
For you to stay mine
Even if we stayed
Together to this point
Youd still be a free spirit
I cant pretend to bring you joy
If we were still together
Youd still be unhappy
And I would be exhausted
Thinking how to be
Everything you want
And everything you need
I would not be happy
Knowing I couldnt be
All the space you need
And all the time to grow
I cant make you love me
But I think you ought to know
If I could tell you anything
This is what Id say
Id start with I still love you
And that every night I pray
That somewhere deep inside your heart
You still have love for me
And you ask yourself the question
If I could tell you anything
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Re: If I Could Tell You Anything
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by ever1der on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:46:20 PM AEST
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| Great. I liked the rhyme. you got the feeling across well and still rhymed; sometimes a hard thing to do. |
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Re: If I Could Tell You Anything
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by moon_light on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 08:36:43 PM AEST
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if a picker paints a tougsand words you have painted a million. you have coult a qustion many have asked over and over agien. good wright.
oh and welcome to ypdc.
lady moonlite |
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Re: If I Could Tell You Anything
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by BurriedByMyLies on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 10:23:15 PM AEST
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| Very nice, touching and easy to grasp poem. Keep up the great work ! |
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Re: If I Could Tell You Anything
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 11:10:49 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC... I enjoyed your poem very much..I hope things work out for you..
Jenni |
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Re: If I Could Tell You Anything
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by hoist1atca on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 12:28:37 AM AEST
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It doesn't matter what I think or anyone else for that matter-
It is your poem so what you think is all that matters-
Keep writting and I look foreward to reading more of your words...
Joe |
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Re: If I Could Tell You Anything
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 03:00:13 PM AEST
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| A long and boring collection of random, generic sappy mush. |
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Re: If I Could Tell You Anything
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by Chilibear on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 08:04:02 PM AEST
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Absolutely amazing! And I know how you feel.... Keep it up.
- Chili |
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