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Please Press Repeat
Contributed by
mangos
on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:48:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Would you please press repeat
A voice crackles then creeps
The words
Touching me so deep
Refresh my memory
What was it you said
You were possessed
Under duress
Under your dress
The snake crawled to caress
The bare walls
Of your loneliness
Allow me to recollect
And feel free to interject
Anything you feel relevant
Or is deserving of my respect
Or are you serving
This meal of neglect
To someone who feels
Only what others reject
Who only thinks
About the death
He protects
Please repeat
Its all I have left
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Re: Please Press Repeat
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 04:05:42 PM AEST
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I love this one. I didn't get a chance to comment the other night, but yeah...it's very good. Seems anguished, and urgent.
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