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what if
Contributed by
jheng
on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:53:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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what if i ask you
"please don't go"
will you consider staying?
with me? by myside?
what if i ask you,
"do you care for me"
will you answer me truthfully
& say whay you really feel?
what if i ask you
"will you hold my hand"
will you do it because
you have feelings for me?
and what if i say
"i think im in love with you"
will you give me a chance
to prove it to you?
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jheng
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2005-10-24 19:53:44]
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Re: what if
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by moon_light on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 08:25:38 PM AEST
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| thease are fealings i can relate to. one pice of advise. go for him if you never try you will regrt it. take it from one who has to regrat it for the rest of thir life. let him read this. its varry sweet and who knows it maybe all you need!!!! |
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Re: what if
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by Serendippitty on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 09:06:38 PM AEST
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| its sweet... i hope you find happiness |
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Re: what if
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 12:59:47 AM AEST
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A very beautiful and expressive poem honest
yet so innocent in it's quest 4 love, ambiguious but when is love not, and even more lovers them selves, lovely peice of poetry, you write well your style has just the right amount of intamacy . . .
Ben |
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