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life
Contributed by
maddie
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Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 08:49:19 PM in AEST
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as i look out the window
i see the raindrops fall down to the ground
with every drop that hits the ground
another piece of my life shatters
by the time the sun takes over the rain
my life lays infront of me broken into millions of pieces
each piece representing a mistake i wish i could take back
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Re: life
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by Serendippitty on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 09:00:09 PM AEST
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| i like short poems because they pack in a lot of meaning and this was such a good poem i see you have a lot of regrets... but dont dwell on mistakes learn from them and grow from them cuz people do make mistakes, some more drastic than others but we cant go back in time and change what we did before. |
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